You looked at me;
you saw right through me—
through my inhibitions, my fears,
my superficial morals.
You looked right through me
to see me as I am.
I looked at you;
I saw right through you—
through the darkness of your soul
and the callousness of your heart.
I reached out to you,
to love you as you are.
They say we are wrong.
They wear us down
with imposed morals and values
until we build a wall to shelter
our self-justifying defense…
and trap ourselves inside.
They say our love is wrong,
but I’d lie in Satan’s arms
to hold you in mine.
©1981 Sharon Gerlach
Another great one. Did you really do this in 1981? It shows a maturity in your words and a natural feel to your flow of verse. A strong emotional undertone to it made it feel good at the last stanza. I liked it.
Yes, I really did write it in 1981. Thanks for the praise; I’ve never been quite sure about the 1980’s poetry. LOL